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Satisfying end, but should I continue?

By sunflowerofice, author of Technically Abroad

Aug 26, 2020: So I’m not going to claim to be the best reviewer, but I got to the end of arc one and since it had a proper conclusion I feel I can do a proper review.

Anyway this story takes place in a world that seems to have both better and worse technology depending on what aspects of it you are looking it. That includes robots, but a lot of tech that barely functions so its actually an overall bigger hinderance than what it would be with what we have etc etc.

Now for the characters lets start with the MC named morgan. One thing about this MC is that it’s never been verified up to this point of we have a male or female one. At first I thought he was a guy then later I thought that she was a girl now I am leaning towards him being a guy, but I still could see her as a girl . . . It doesn’t take away from the story so far, but it is a tickle in my mind that wants to be answered.

The bestie of the mc Karina is a very happy out there girl who works hard and tries to do what she can to get what she wants, in her case becoming an actress. It’s a fun contracts to morgan and hey yin and yang characters work for me so to speak. If you have someone that pulls someone who sometimes weights them down you can get both directions so to speak moving of "lets run down plot line" and "wait we gotta check before we run down plot line" and having both options works.

Last of the main cast is a robot named R8PR that you would pronounce like on star wars. He is a robot that shouldn’t exist because it was made against certain rules or something like that, I forget the exact wording to explain it. Because of that the robot hides in abandoned places (a common thing where they live) and surfs the net a lot to look at things.

On to the plot. This next bit might have spoilers so i’ll use the at symbol as a barrier between here and the last part in case you want to avoid spoilers.

You learn about the social media killer. Basically someone who does cancel culture on a big scale by pulling out all sorts of private personal information and ruining their life. From political figures down to school students and the cast tries to find the killer. R8PR helps a lot there and they eventually find the killer and hunt them down and get mistaken for them and a lot of pinball stuff that still works and fits while the robot does research and the people do the foot work, sometimes resulting in one of them being harmed bad enough for a hospital visit.


I will say that the story arc had, to me, a good conclusion. It felt like a good ending point for Morgans story, but it turns out it isn’t the end of the story. For some reason this is odd to me and makes me unsure if I will continue. I want to, but at the same time the ending was very well done in a way I dont want to risk losing that feeling of closure by reading more if that makes sense.

Sort of reminds me of when an in person friend published a book and I read the whole thing on a car ride with her to a convention to sell her products and at the end I said something like "I like how it had a proper conclusion so you don’t have any thoughts on a sequel" only to be told it was the first of a trilogy.

A great ending can be great, but at the same time if it’s to good and not the full ending it, to me, leaves me unsure if I want to continue while wanting to. I’ve had other stories where I loved the first in a series but the rest sort of fell fast and hard.

So I will say this the first arc was something I really enjoyed. It’s not series enough to be a pure comedy not to comedic to be a proper drama in a way that works. It has good characters a fun and interesting story and a really good ending, but since it works like a multi book series there will be a new conflict in arc two and likely three four etc.

I will say that’s the only reason I haven’t started arc 2 yet. Because I’m not sure if I want to risk the good feeling of arc 1s end and move on to arc 2. I know it might prevent me from a great second arc, but for now at least I’ll leave it be.

although to be honest I’ll probably read it at some point, but for now it’s a more of will i read it now or later.

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rough start that got better

By sunflowerofice, author of Technically Abroad

Jan 1, 2020: Alright so here is my short term non spoilery review. It starts out a bit rough in my mind and it really felt rushed. It got better as far as i have read (which is just in book three) and i think it will do so based on the betterment I saw. Also the character isn’t hero mcheroson which I like. Or noble mchonorton.

now on for the longer one.

The series starts out a bit rough and rushed. In fact it feels fairly rushed for a while in a way. Based on the premise I won’t say it needs to be super long and drawn out, but it still feels pretty quick that things ended up how they did and how easily everyone adjusted to what happened, especially with the main character.

Another thing is, while i didn’t count it, I would be surprised if any of the chapters in book one had more than 1000 words. Book two only a few maybe. I know you don’t need every chapter to be like 10,000 words, but still. Maybe it’s just me but when every chapter is so short it feels like how I talked about dbz with friends once. You only need to watch one out of three episodes because you get last time and next time on dbz then you watch the one episode.

On the plus side the main character is more real. Flawed and more than a little bit of a jerk who is arrogant and looks down on people.

I also like how some of the stuff is done like how the mc tells the girls they should learn to protect themselves because we can’t know what people might do in a world where killing is more casual, even if it’s monsters they are targeting.

I will say though for how on the ball that he seems at times he isn’t very curious. Sure he has some social anxiety, but a few questions like maybe what are the laws of the land would have been nice to see him think about.

So while I wont say it is one I will rank as top tier I have easily seen worse and since it got better already I have hopes it sill keep doing so.

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By Nova Girl93, author of RU in? Saga

Dec 15, 2019: I love the wild west/post apocalyptic feel of this. The characters are well fleshed out. You quickly come to care about them as you follow them along. There is plenty of adventure and intrigue. This one had me hooked from the beginning.

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