Oct 16, 2010: The first chapter was a bit confusing. I thought we had a single protagonist on an empty street, but then someone else spoke and we had an unknown number of people wandering among the twisted wreckage. Hopefully more backstory will be provided in the next few chapters.

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Oct 21, 2010: In three years of participating in the web fiction community, I have learned a few things from stories like Tales of MU, Intimate History, The Legion of Nothing, Alisiyad and others. Through articles and discussions on Novelr and Ergo Fiction, as well. There are lots of resources available to writers online, as well as writing classes in communities.

On top of that, there’s the history of literature and the local library.

Here [more . . .]

Nov 8, 2010: Hollow World is similar to the Stand and other apocalyptic tales, yet it has its own flavor. I immediately identified with several of the characters and appreciated the method of destruction. The cast of characters is wide ranging, and the antagonists are creepy. The Pennyman is an interesting spin that has me wanting more.

The pacing is relatively fast, and the direction is not always predictable.

The author is very good at [more . . .]