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By Silver1, member

Mar 18, 2009: If you check this story out, skip the first chapter. Nothing at all happens in it, except character introductions (which can be gotten just fine from chapter two) and the fact that the main character ditched school, a fact which can also be gotten quite nicely from chapter two.

After the rather disappointing first chapter, things perk up enormously. Chapter two works way better as an introduction to the characters, revealing their insecurities, and setting us up for either a romance or an adventure.

This next chapter is delicately handled, well-written, and each chapter just gets better after that. You’ll like the characters, and while it has some cliches, its all part of the genre, and acceptable considering. ^^ Fur-fans, you will adore!

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