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Interrupting the Drop

By Linda Schoales, editor

Nov 5, 2009: “Dead Drop” is the story of Trey, a 20-year old drifter in LA, who finds something stashed in the park that he thinks is going to be his ticket to a better life. He’s come in on the middle of a “drop” and figures he can squeeze somebody for some cash. Unfortunately, he already has people after him and this little package just adds to his troubles.

The story is told in first person by Trey and it’s mostly a monologue of what’s in his head. It’s like a journal or a letter addressed to an unknown person. There are short snatches of dialog and brief action sequences but it’s mostly about what Trey is thinking. He even refers to himself by name sometimes.

Trey is an interesting character. He’s both articulate and rough. There’s a lot of coarse language and violent thoughts but the writing is solid and smoother than you might expect. Trey comes up with some surprising bits of knowledge and spends a lot of time analysing other people, their motives and their lives. He has big dreams but no real plans as to how to bring them about. He “talks” like he’s a tough guy with a short fuse and dangerous past, but he seems to be using a lot of self-talk to build himself up. There’s a lot of repetition of certain themes, such as his father having served in Vietnam, and his own skill in survival. He seems to feel contempt for most of the people he meets unless he decides they’re tough, like him. The other characters don’t even have names, just titles that Trey gives them, like the Nerd, Tokyo and Rodeo.

I have to admit I could only stand to be in Trey’s head for a chapter or two at a time. His bragging and swearing got to me after that. In fact I stopped reading after 8 chapters. That may also be because I don’t like reading white text on a black background. If you like character driven stories told in first person, you may find “Dead Drop” interesting. The character was certainly vivid if not particularly pleasant company.

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