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PROJECT SHELF LIFE

I gave it one star instead of two to balance out the Author rating himself.

By Whyknotzoidberg, author of Hotfoot

Feb 22, 2016: Cool ideas are present in this story. Ideas I’d love to see fleshed out once the writer clears up this confusing mess. He switches tenses, perspectives, and writing styles at the drop of a hat. Basically as of now let the writer clean it up and check back in little while. I’ll update my review once a significant change is implemented. The story has a lot of potential, but really needs proofreading, and that’s coming from me, the writer of Hotfoot.

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