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Editor’s First Impression

By Linda Schoales, editor

Aug 9, 2010: The first chapter describes the characters in the radio studio and gives them a few lines of dialogue. There’s a lot of description of their clothes, hair styles, etc. The dialogue is mostly in single sentences. Not much happening yet.

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