Feb 19, 2016: As a superhero author, I always enjoy when superpowers are injected into other genres. That’s why I decided to check this seriall out, and honestly it’s handled pretty well. Without powers AndTheAdventureContinued wold be a very bland story. It’s other element’s aren’t bad, but they aren’t too good either.

Story: Decent. Interesting world with a well thought out magic system. Villians have cool powers and abilities, but their characterization is a bit weak. The author heavily relies on overused tropes, and they aren’t very memorable. Supporting characters and orbit agonists are decent, but many of them don’t seem to have much character. There are some standouts, but otherwise it’s a pretty good but slightly vanilla main cast.

Fight Scenes: This is where it shines. Interesting abilities are well utilized, all though it does suffer slightly from the Avengers school of tissue paper mooks. The Heroes tear through most baddies with ease, but when they encounter a worthy opponent things get good.

Writing: Wierd. The voice/style is a well and good, but there are typos and wierd paragraphs. For example it does this a lot: "So then I said what’s up? Did you see the movie?

It was great right? I loved the characters!"

In case you didn’t see it, like I didn’t on my first time encountering this, It was all the same quote from the same person. This can become really confusing since the author forgets quote marks sometimes.

In short it’s a pretty good story with interesting abilities and lore with serviceable characters and strange writing.

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