Despite several great reviews on the Web Fiction Guide and umpteen star ratings I very nearly missed out on this one.

I enjoyed the first episode and the next couple had me a bit perplexed as to the type of story I was reading.  It is worthwhile sticking with though because it is a great read, the main character is a riot and the story is developing well.

Personally I found the site design a little boring and I would like to see a link to the current chapter easier to find. 

I am unsure what the author’s thoughts are with regard to comments because despite leaving several he has yet to acknowledge any.  I know that I am not the only commenter in this position and accept that it is nothing personal.  It does leave me feeling rather unappreciated as a reader though.

N.B.  In the past month or so this site has undergone a remarkable makeover and in my opinion it is now one of the better designed web fiction sites I have visited.  The author is also engaging with all commenters and I have increased my rating accordingly.

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