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They Have Come to Warn Us by Sreya Alladi & Richenda Gould

They have come to warn us ... but will we listen? 

The story is about two middle aged female druids who find that their connection to trees is beginning to fade, and that these trees hold a devastating secret.  Desperate, they start an aggressive mailing campaign to find the next facilitator, but their mailings receive shocking results.  They have come to warn us . . . but will we listen?


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Listed: Jun 10, 2009

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Editor: Chris Poirier
June 9, 2009

The authors report this is a work in progress, and, unfortunately, it shows.  Both the dialogue and narrative seem rather stilted.  Hopefully, things will improve as they edit.

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