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Long but good

By KellieR, member

Sep 3, 2015: Good ideas in this story. It gets a little repetitive at a couple of points where the author is really trying to get the reader to understand Abigail’s thoughts and/ or reasons for her actions. I think these parts can be edited down. Overall I am enjoying the story.

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