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A.L.F. Warz by Jaqhama

 

Per Sonja’s review, a story in the Starship Troopers vein.

Note: A.L.F. Warz contains some harsh language.


A serialized novel

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Listed: Oct 14, 2008

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Reminiscent of Starship Troopers

Editor: Sonja Nitschke
November 16, 2008

The main trouble with A.L.F WARZ is the pacing.  I’ve already read 7 entries and I still don’t know why I should continue reading further.  The characters are just names, and nothing appears to be at stake.  Since they are soldiers in a war, there is a lot of fighting, and not much else.  Despite the action, there is no impetus to read further.  True, this is exacerbated by the fact that there isn’t a link to the beginning that I could find, and, once the beginning is found, the Newer Post doesn’t work.

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