Reminiscent of Starship Troopers

November 16, 2008by Sonja Nitschke

The main trouble with A.L.F WARZ is the pacing.  I’ve already read 7 entries and I still don’t know why I should continue reading further.  The characters are just names, and nothing appears to be at stake.  Since they are soldiers in a war, there is a lot of fighting, and not much else.  Despite the action, there is no impetus to read further.  True, this is exacerbated by the fact that there isn’t a link to the beginning that I could find, and, once the beginning is found, the Newer Post doesn’t work.

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