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Black Meridian by Z.Q. Spark

There's a New Kind of Public Servant 

Some facts about humans: They are intelligent, versatile creatures with a tendency for murder and vice.

Zeta, a swordsman from a villa at the summit of Greenwich Mountain, has heard many stories about the “Sigma World,” the colloquial term for any and all things superpowered in the world. He’s also heard of the many tragedies, as well as the many wonders humankind has created in its history, even if he has yet to see it in person.

Following the philosophy of his teacher, Gin Kagan, Zeta intends to become a “Servant of Humanity,” in an endeavor to protect mankind from its gravest threats, from power-hungry sigma-users, but most importantly, from itself.

He’s going to need a lot of allies to pull that off, even if he doesn’t understand that yet.

Note: Black Meridian contains pervasive graphic violence; also, some harsh language.


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Listed: Feb 20, 2019

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Swashbuckling Swords!

By Hejin57, author of Music Masters

Mar 22, 2019: Fantasy has often been a difficult genre for me to review. Mostly, this is because the genre as a whole is defined by various trappings, and it becomes difficult for stories to stand out in a sea of cliches and generalizations whenever swords and sorcery is involved.

Today’s story though, Black Meridian, succeeds where other fantasy-type ventures do not, with a mix of genres and tones that create a delicious and rich concoction.

The story in question revolves around a wandering warrior named Zeta, whose goal in life is simple: to serve humanity. He views his fellow man as his masters, and takes it upon himself to improve their lives for the better. In Zeta’s case though, his talent lies in swordplay, with his prized blade Black Meridian being the favored tool. What follows is a series of vignettes as Zeta travels different parts of a fantasy-esque world, fighting enemies and meeting allies along the way.

Among these is the concept of sigmas. They, essentially, are the powers of this setting, with each sigma granting a different ability be they mundane or fantastical. What intrigues me most is how the sigmas are applied to each specific person, and how they can be mixed and matched to create new, strange abilities. It’s an expansive and potentially endless system, and I applaud the author for making something so unique within this kind of setting.

Plotwise, Black Meridian is simple and straightforward. Most of the strength lies in the dialogue, which is playful and romantic enough to give the image of pulp stories and other swashbuckling tales. The action is fantastic as well, evoking a sort of anime-quality of sword-fighting that never feels out of place. Z.Q. Spark’s sense of humor is also very well utilized in the story, and it helps to make the reader laugh despite all the battles and swordplay.

As for the characters themselves, Zeta is a standout. His skill combined with his almost Edwards Scissorhands-level lack of social skills makes him both endearing and impressive. Other characters like the shifty and sometimes difficult Hera, her henchmen Berto and Igel, and villains Terrent, Marc and Rex Balder, form an entertaining little universe that is simply begging to be expanded on.

Of the few cons I have with this story, most of them revolve around some aspects of the pacing. There are some points in the story where the action drags, while at other times we’re sent at a blinding pace through fight scene after fight scene. It could certainly be balanced better, but in the grand scheme of things this is a very minor flaw.

All in all, this a unique gem of an action story with interesting lore, fun characters, and a memorable power system. For someone who usually despises the anime-esque "power-level" stories that populate the web serial scene, this was a welcome surprise.

Final score: 4/5

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