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Commercial Novel by Anonymous

From desperation, art. 

An experimental novel combining crass commercialism, reader response, and time-tested themes like love, fear, and desperation.

Note: Commercial Novel is unfinished, with no recent updates.  It contains some harsh language.


A serialized novel, with no recent updates

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Listed: Jul 9, 2010

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Editor’s First Impression

By Linda Schoales, editor

Jul 8, 2010: The first chapter is about desperation. A man wishing he could write something good, but determined to write something that will make money, in order to pay the mortgage.

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Great Concept, Better Execution

By Chuck S-L, member

Jul 11, 2010: "She needed a story that others could slip into, a story that would overflow its sentences, a story like love."

Metafiction is a hard thing to do right. It’s easy to lose your reader in experimental nonsense or lugubrious faux-Borges prose. When the metafictional conceit is a commentary on the financial reality and dynamics of online fiction, it has even more of a chance to appear crass and ill-tempered. The percentage of low-quality attempts in this genre only make the exceptional [more . . .]

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By MedleyMisty, author of In the Valley of the Sun

Jul 10, 2010: This is honestly one of the better stories I’ve read online. Wonderful writing, great characterization, good imagery. It also brings attention to current issues and social problems.

I highly recommend it, and I will be watching for more updates and am very interested in seeing where the story goes. I’d like to donate myself, but my husband is in the same boat as the author in the story.

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