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CONSTANTCHAOTIC

It might be good, if…

By Farmerbob1, author of Set In Stone

Jun 5, 2014: The story and world seem like they might be interesting, but the author really needs to get rid of all the strange non-English characters that appear throughout every chapter I looked in. Spacing between paragraphs is inconsistent too.

I read a couple chapters at the beginning, and the end. The quality of the prose itself at the end seemed a little better than at the beginning, but the weird non-English characters and inconsistent paragraph spacing were still there at the end, and too painful to endure. I couldn’t concentrate on the story.

If the paragraph spacing and non-English characters were addressed, this might be a good read.

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