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		<title>Not as bad as everyone is saying&#8230;.</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 21:45:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Frances Gonzalez</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[The writing is shaky and occasionally difficult but not impossible&#8212;and I sense that with time and practice the author may improve. What&#8217;s needed is a good editor who can prune some parts and help the author expand on others. With the author&#8217;s clear sense of direction and straightforward prose (yes, there are paragraphs that aren&#8217;t [...]]]></description>
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		<title>Ouch!</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 21:02:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I have to give Linda credit for getting as far as she did. This is a difficult read at best. I agree with everything she says about the style itself, though I see potential in the story. This work needs the talents of both a good proofreader and an even better editor.]]></description>
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		<title>Couldn’t finish it</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2009 20:13:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Linda Schoales</dc:creator>
		
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