Having crash-landed on the most boring planet in the universe, a disgruntled spaceman struggles to survive. As he attempts to adjust to his new environment, he recalls moments from his past and the events that led to his current predicament.
Having crash-landed on the most boring planet in the universe, a disgruntled spaceman struggles to survive. As he attempts to adjust to his new environment, he recalls moments from his past and the events that led to his current predicament.
Note: Disgruntled Spaceman contains some graphic violence and harsh language.
Tags: black comedy · blogfic · fantasy · humor · science fiction
Listed: Jun 19, 2009
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This is written with a difficult viewpoint; a series of journal entries. This is a tempting format to use, but, as we see here, it makes for difficult reading. In addition he has chosen a very difficult verb tense, making the reading doubly difficult.
The log entries really need dates and times. That is one of the real advantages of that format.
I will look forward to seeing how this turns out.
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