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Awkward Execution Meets Interesting Premise

By Carcharocles, author of The Revelation

Aug 11, 2017: Two disclosures: Most of this review focuses on the chapter Demon Night, as well as the first entry into Dinner and a Movie. This won’t be indicative of the serial as a whole. This review was done as part of a review exchange.

Don’t Feed the Dark describes itself as an apocalyptic zombie series, but that’s a bit misleading. The zombies in the story are a rather unique take on the genre, being halfway between simple undead and mutant creature; it’s a fresh take on the genre, but could use some work, at least in the early chapters.

The biggest problem with the story is that the author focuses too much on the details. He’ll spend an entire paragraph describing an individual zombie in such a way that breaks the flow of the story. Although he improves quite a bit in the first five entries, he doesn’t seem to have formed a balance between narrative and description—it’s mostly tell rather than show. He can also be rather wordy at times, forming sentences that seem overly long and clumsy. He improves rather quickly in this regard, but it can be hard to look past these flaws.

The story itself seems interesting. It begins with a serial killer—an unlikeable character with some rather stereotypical "symptoms," breaking into a house to take a life, only to find himself fighting for his own and that of his intended victim’s—if only temporarily on her part. This can be off-putting to readers who would prefer their heroes have at least something about them they can root for, but it fits the setting well. After all, what zombie movie doesn’t have that one psychopathic character wreaking havoc on the dead and living alike? However, the story shifts away from him and his "victim" after only four entries, moving on to a different character and setting entirely. While this would not necessarily be a bad thing, the two chapters don’t have much in common, and the rather sexual nature of the second chapter’s first entry stands in stark contrast to the graphic events that preceded it.

It’s not that this is a bad thing—it just won’t suit everyone’s tastes. Fans of B horror flicks will likely love this serial, especially since that fifth entry lacks many of the pitfalls of the first chapter. However, it won’t attract many readers outside of its rather narrow base—fans of the Romero movies will likely find it cheap. Instead, this story will likely appeal mainly to the fans of 80’s exploitation flicks and low-budget zombie films. I recommend it for those fans, although there’s no reason for other horror fans to avoid it.

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Walking Dead meets Sin City

By Team Contract, member

Sep 6, 2016: Don’t Feed the Dark is a zombie apocalypse story and by any measure a very good one. The prose and dialogue is well written, the pacing fast and the atmosphere is creepy and spot on. However, to only define it as such does not do justice to the great story being told by Scott Scherr.

The real hook of this tale are the point of view characters. Scherr not only tells a horrifically graphic and gory zombie thriller, but through the eyes of the most broken and unlikely people possible. To not give too much away, there is a Dexter like serial killer, a stripper, an adulterer and an alcoholic mother. Each of these characters are very real and paint the world as such, warts and all, which makes the zombie attacks all the more frightening and realistic when they occur.

And, not only are these characters broken in every which way, but we’re introduced to them on the worse day of their lives and I’m not even talking about the zombie attack. Scherr’s skill in pulling off these types of characters is the immense amount of humanity he brings to each of them, with redeeming qualities that make you sympathetic to them, even at the height of their bad behavior. Its this mix of throwing characters that would be interesting in their own right and then forcing them into this nightmare scenario that sets this story apart.

If you’re a fan of gritty realism and heart pounding horror (and aren’t too squeamish!) Don’t Feed the Dark will be a must read for you.

EDIT: After reading through the first book I’m changing my review from 4.5 to 5 out of 5 stars. This story is a page turner like none other. The more I read the better it gets. If you are a fan of survival horror, start reading this now! But I warn you, be prepared for sleepless nights!

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