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Dream World Collective by Ben Y. Faroe

A world without bosses. Or paychecks. 

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Five friends quit their awful jobs and move into a beautiful condemned house on a mission to live life to the fullest.  Unfortunately, amid scheming, a philosophical restaurant, punches, lots of tea, true love, a technodrome and the possible subversion of many small children, they do still have to find creative ways to pay the bills.


A serialized novel, updating Monday, Wednesday, and Friday

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Listed: Jan 19, 2010

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Editor: Linda Schoales
January 19, 2010

The first chapter is well-written, with a very nice protagonist who handwrites notes to each of his neighbours inviting them over for tea and cookies.  Obviously an alternate reality, it sounds like a very pleasant place to visit.

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