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FATE'S JANITORS

Editor’s First Impression

Editor: Linda Schoales
February 7, 2010

The writing in the first 2 chapters is solid.  The story starts with a young intern showing up for his first day at a mental health facility.  The first person he meets is either a very mellow patient or a very casual employee.  It’ll be interesting to see how long it is before the intern becomes a patient.

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