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FICKLE FORTUNE

An easy difficult read

By Von, member

Dec 11, 2009: I found fickle fortune to be a delightfully easy difficult read. I like the language the author uses, and I think I like the underlying story, if I could get at it.

The author needs, IMO to rewrite her work, and work on showing and not telling, on letting the characters (and I think they are good characters) be themselves, and do things, instead of thinking.

As well, the story needs to jump a little less. I found myself bouncing from place to place.

But I like this writing, and want to see here do more, and better. I am convinced there is something in there, if it can come out.

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