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Don’t let the wall of text scare you!

By Alexander.Hollins, member

Jan 4, 2015: Fooled opens with a large prologue, a massive wall of text. Skip it. read the next chapter, catch up, then go back and read the prologue. Trust me!

Marco is the stereotypical Court Fool, but while being amusing and a friend to the prince, who hates being prince, he also pines for the princess, who hates that her brother the prince listens more to his Fool than to her. Ohh, and there is a mild case of DOOM hanging over the kingdom. It’s an interesting story that’s just starting to get legs a few chapters in. Much in the style of Caelum Lex, the story is accompanied by fine illustrations done by the author which often add to and have yet to distract from the story. The style is a bit stilted, but typos and grammar errors are non existent, which is always a plus to me. I’m looking forward to see where the story goes and to watch the growth of the author.

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