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Full Dark City by Chris Edwards

 

Full Dark City is a blog I just started last week.  The story follows homicide detective Jack Dillon as he tries to solve the murder of his ex-girlfriend Kate Riley.  In what I hope will be a kind of futuristic film noir thriller, Jack Dillon will battle corruption and himself as he tracks a killer.  As of this post there are currently five instalments of Full Dark City so far.  I post twice a week, Monday and Friday, and there will be an occasional Wednesday bonus post.  So drop by and take a look.  I hope you will enjoy it.

Note: Full Dark City contains some graphic sexual content, graphic violence, and harsh language.


A serialized novel, updating twice weekly

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Listed: May 31, 2010

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Editor: Linda Schoales
May 30, 2010

The first chapter is well-written and reminiscent of the beginning of an episode of Law and Order or CSI.  A cop shows up at the scene of a murder.  Unfortunately, he knows the victim.

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There’s a dead body

Member: Gavin Williams
September 12, 2011

"Full Dark City" is a solid, standard crime investigation story in its opening chapters.  Jack is a detective, his partner Roscoe is used to him zoning out at crime scenes as he tries to envision what went down, and Kate Riley is the dead prosecutor that they have to put to rest.

Unfortunately for Jack, Kate was also his former lover.

The prose sticks to the facts, like a good cop should.  The details are all there, stark and realistic.  The narration is a little old-fashioned—Jack "shows" us what he sees very well, but "tells" us about expository details from the past.  However, it works for the genre, a hard-boiled detective giving quick factual summations to bring the case up to speed and concentrate on the here and now.

My only problem with this solid, well-written story is that it doesn’t seem to be doing anything original that Raymond Chandler and Sam Spade didn’t accomplish fifty or sixty years ago.  I can hear Bogey narrating, but when he talks about pinging cell phones suddenly the whole story gets a little dull, because Bogey’s dead. 

If you miss the old-school detective novels, this could be for you.  If you’re looking for a new twist, or something unique, I haven’t come across that yet but it’s solid enough so maybe there’s hope.

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