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Gladiators of Magic by Jason Richard

A Web Novel about A Gladiator Who is Forced to Fight with Magic. 

Corian stood up to the emperor, and now he’s paying for it. He must fight in an arena where the primary weapon is magic. Getting magic powers might seem like a good thing, but there’s two problems. First, the fighters’ powers aren’t proper magic. They’re designed to work only in the arena, so there’s no chance of using these powers to escape. The second problem is a bit more serious. Corian absolutely hates magic! After this, he’ll probably hate it even more, unless he can find some way of using these limited powers to escape.


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Listed: Aug 13, 2011

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Not terribly deep, but it has a good beat (and I can dance to it)

By ubersoft, author of Curveball

Aug 18, 2011: The premise of the story is very straightforward: the hero defies an evil emperor, is caught, and is forced to fight in gladiatorial games for the amusement of the citizens of the empire. The gladiatorial games, however, has a twist—the gladiators are given magic powers to spice up the fights. Unfortunately for the prisoners-turned-gladiators, the powers can only be used in the arena, which makes them largely useless when trying to escape . . . maybe.

The story isn’t complicated. The problem is set up very early, and you follow the hero’s attempts to free himself from imprisonment while his fellow prisoners appear to have lost all hope. Most of the people in the story tend to lean toward stock characters, and it feels like an old Flash Gordon serial, if Flash Gordon had been fantasy instead of science fiction. It moves along at a brisk pace and while the writing is a little unsophisticated I found the author’s obvious enthusiasm for the story engaging and overall I thought the story was fun.

Don’t expect complex characters, or intricately clever wordplay, or deep, thought-provoking themes. There are spelling errors, a few missing words, and the exclamation point is used liberally throughout. That said, it’s cheerful, it moves along quickly, and it made me curious to discover what happens next.

This might be a fun story as long as you’re in the right mood.

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