Golden Vampires is a blog fic, which is like fictional characters writing their story in their own journal (kind of like Dracula by Bram Stoker).  However, unlike the above story, Golden Vampires is not written well.  The characters are flimsy at best and have the same voice.  The author gives us visual cues so that we know which protagonist is speaking, but I don’t think that one girl using correct grammar and the other not leads to three dimensional characters.  It only serves to make approximately half of the posts bothersome to read.

The impetus to provide the drive for the thematic elements is severely lacking and I’m left wondering why I should care for these characters. 

In the end, this doesn’t promise to deliver anything new and it does the old badly.

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