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HOLLOW WORLD

Editor’s First Impression

By Linda Schoales, editor

Oct 16, 2010: The first chapter was a bit confusing. I thought we had a single protagonist on an empty street, but then someone else spoke and we had an unknown number of people wandering among the twisted wreckage. Hopefully more backstory will be provided in the next few chapters.

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