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IMMORTALE

Editor’s First Impression

Editor: Sonja Nitschke
July 26, 2009

In the beginning, I found the writing of this work to be fairly strong—the words provoked tangible images.  However, as the novel continued, the writing became more awkward, which made for slightly difficult reading. 

The plot itself is slow moving.  Personally, I’m not a fan of prologues and the one for this work was in six parts.  Unfortunately, the stalled beginning wasn’t compensated with a particularly strong or likable narrator. 

However, as it stands now, the action is beginning to pick up a pace: strange, horrific reflections within mirrors promises to lend some extra excitement to the story.  As listed, the latest update happened some time ago, though it was implied in a comment to another reader that it would be updated again soon.

Is it worth your time as a reader?  For me, it wasn’t.  A story has to have a hook, a motivation to keep reading, and for me, it simply wasn’t there.

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