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Keeper by Kristine Williams

 

When Captain Alex Marcase’s estranged father dies, he hopes his inheritance will be enough to fund his next deep space expedition. When his inheritance turns out to be a genetically-altered slave named Evan, it’s just the beginning of the end of Alex’s normal, orderly life. Not only does Evan have his own brand of morality, his special abilities are coveted by his late owner’s enemies. As the pair head into deep space with their enemies in hot pursuit, Alex’s chief rival ahead of them, and a saboteur onboard their ship, will they be able to learn to appreciate each other as individuals in time? Or will their differences be too much to overcome?

Note: Madness, Book 2 in the Keeper series, is now available.


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Sci fi adventure

By Linda Schoales, editor

Mar 29, 2009: “Keeper” is a solid, well-written sci fi novel with philosophical discussions on slavery and genetic manipulation. Alex Marcase is a starship captain and explorer known for finding things no else can, and beating his opposition to the prize. When his funding runs out, he gets word that his long-lost father has died and left him an estate. The estate turns out to be a Sha’erah, which means property, but is actually a person. Or at least, Alex thinks of him as a person.

Alex has no memory of his father but knows that Spencer Marcase had a reputation as a rich and powerful man with few scruples. Since Alex is desperate for money to finance his next voyage, a race for riches in a distant nebula, he jumps at the chance to get his inheritance. When he meets Evan, the Sha’erah, he’s shocked, disappointed and confused. Alex had thought the Sha’erah were a myth, something that happened in the past but had been outlawed years ago.

The Sha’erah are genetically altered before birth to have whatever talents their owner wants. The owner, called a Keeper, wears a silver ring that “magically” seals the ownership. The Keeper gives the orders and the Sha’erah obeys. They don’t even think about disobeying since this is their life. Evan was ordered to specifications by Alex’s father and picked up when he was 5. This is the only life he’s known. Now he’s been left to a stranger in Spencer’s will and his life is about to change completely.

Alex and Evan are both interesting characters. Alex is horrified at the moral implications of owning another person, even one that everyone else thinks isn’t really a human being at all. His dilemma is between owning another person, or selling another person. Evan is irritated because Alex has no idea what he is, what he can do, and how to give him orders. The two have a friction-filled relationship, and neither seems capable of asking the right questions.

The narration is third person but switches between Alex and Evan’s perspectives. It’s a bit cold and distant, with little humour, despite the amount of dialog. For science fiction, there’s a minimum of techo-speak. In some ways, it’s a bit like an episode of Star Trek. It’s an adventure story in space, with philosophical musings on some social issues. The action scenes are quick, the women are lovely and devious, and the rich are very different from the rest of us.

I didn’t read past the first 3 chapters because I found the narration a bit dry, the story too humourless, and the conversational circling between the two main characters a bit annoying. However, so far the novel is well-written and it has a lot of potential as a space adventure story. If you like science fiction adventures, you should enjoy this.

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Full Speed Ahead

By Morgan O'Friel, editor

Dec 11, 2008: I thought I’d put up a quick bit of information about myself before I get to the actual bulk of the review. As both a reader, writer, and newsletter compiler, I’ve been involved in the original slave fiction niche/subgenre for years. As a whole I’ve written several serials that included this theme (albeit under a pen name), and enjoyed many more. When it comes to the theme of slavery in fiction, I’m not easily put-off.

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A Review in Bullets

By M.C.A. Hogarth, author of Earthrise

Apr 2, 2010: Good things:

Nicely realized setting Intriguing premise Protagonists that aren’t teenagers or twentysomethings (seems to be rare online) Portrays friendship between two men (also rare!) Believable personality types Plot is sometimes unexpected

Not so good things: - Writing needs polish - Characters have repetitive arguments/thoughts - Some plot threads left hanging - Central issue (slavery) is never really discussed in full, despite the protagonist thinking about agonizing over it

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A Few Positive Notes

By GreenGlass, member

Dec 7, 2009: A very satisfying complete novel. There are under a dozen chapters, but they are significant, so be forewarned. I found they flew by and left me wanting more.

I really enjoyed the premise of this story. Although it has action, interesting sci fi features, and so on, it is an extremely relationship driven (without being romantic!), so keep that in mind if you were expecting fast paced sci fi. If you like explorations of individuality, self, and free will in fiction [more . . .]

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Keeper

By here2read, member

Feb 24, 2009: I liked this book so much I had to smile, when I saw there was a book #2 "Madness" which I am currently reading.

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