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Editor’s First Impression

By Fiona Gregory, editor

Feb 1, 2013: This story is interesting, though I didn’t find the writing quite as strong as its sequel, Strings of Retaliation. It noticeably improves as the story progresses, showing the evolution of an author. At first I thought the main character was too over-the-top and cartoonish, but further reading revealed that there’s a logical reason for her to be that way.

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