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LOVE AND TREASON ON THE VERGE

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By Tangerine Haze, member

Feb 17, 2011: This is a well-written novella. It’s full of details that hint of a fascinating story ‘verse. In this story we only see a small slice of things. The author manages to fit quite a bit of character background without bogging down the flow of the story. This story feels like it should be part of a larger work. It would be perfect as a flashback chapter. As it is I was left wanting more. This story has more depth than a typical novella. I was frustrated that a story that could have been epic was squeezed into something so short. It’s definitely worth reading. I just wish there was more to it!

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