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MIDNIGHT MOONLIGHT

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By daymon34, member

Feb 6, 2015: A fun story with a person that has real problems, and that is before anything bad happens. Which it does, and then gets messy, then gets dark, then lightens up some. Nothing like having fear be your primary motivator, and poor Abigail is driven by crazy fear, stuff that is not real and stuff that she didn’t know is real.

I enjoy this one quite a bit and Eren is one of my favorite type of writers, she will talk back with commenters on her page.

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MIDNIGHT MOONLIGHT

Long but good

By KellieR, member

Sep 3, 2015: Good ideas in this story. It gets a little repetitive at a couple of points where the author is really trying to get the reader to understand Abigail’s thoughts and/ or reasons for her actions. I think these parts can be edited down. Overall I am enjoying the story.

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