Mind + Body, by Aaron Dunlap is a fast-paced scroller.

I’m currently reading a novel, some webfiction, and lots of nonfiction, but I tore through this novel. It’s 400+ pages in PDF, but it sure didn’t feel that long. It’s a simple mystery/action plot – a high school senior tracking down all the weird shit that happens to him after his Marine Corps father dies.

At first it felt similar to Doctorow’s Little Brother – the teenager thrust into a conspiracy too large for him to see its end, a fairly straight-forward love interest, etc. The more I read, however, the less alike they felt. Mind + Body is definitely has less to say, making it simultaneously shallower and less preachy. Mind + Body is not afraid of its simplicity – the work is less punctuated by action and fights than it is driven by them. And it works.

Unfortunately the final product reads like a draft. There are a solid handful of sentences that just aren’t finished. They require 1-5 words to finish the thought, but they’re just MIA. Our first person narrator definitely feels his age (though articulate), which is a plus (he says things like "the internet told me"). In the first third of the book phrases are often jarring. I’m not certain if I got used to the character or if Dunlap got used to him.

Regardless, I thoroughly enjoyed this gripping, surprisingly real novel. It should be picked up by a publisher and marketed as a YA novel – it’s good enough.

Edit: Dunlap commented on my site that he is still editing and reviewing, and will continue posting more final versions of the novel as he completes them.

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