It’s not a story. At least not so far.

Neocommon Era appears to be what you’d get if someone were somehow sending blog posts from nearly one hundred years in the future back to a blog in the present.

So, it’s worth mentioning that the writing’s clear. The universe seems interesting enough, but so far there are only three articles posted. Also the "white text on black background" theme seems a little hard to read.

So . . . No plot and no characters.

That’s not a bad thing necessarily, but that’s what Neocommon Era is.

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