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Allen Delais woke alone one day on the edge of a vast forest, where all he had was the strength of his arm and a strange, divine mark above his eye.  His memories were elusive, inseparable from his dreams.  Luck landed him a position on a passing ship, and two years passed while he learned about the world around him and sailed the Aela on the rivership Dhara.  Eventually he lands in Rylar, the capital of the north, where he delivers a letter of commission from the Dhara’s captain.  The appeal of the Northern Guard’s tradition is strong, and hard-won skill at arms and a mind that takes easily to the tactics of battle have forged a place for him, but that place feels hollow.  His days are filled with labor and his nights are burdened by memories and questions that leave him restless through the dark hours and waiting for the dawn.

Creeping over the horizon, war threatens to take away all that he has built, and it brings with it the ghosts of his past–or perhaps they are more real than ghosts.

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Author: Chad Writtenfire
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Listed: Saturday, July 12th, 2008
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Editor: Sonja Nitschke
July 15, 2008

Just a brief note before I continue – A Northern Heart is a serialized novel still being updated.  This review is subject to change as the story grows.

I won’t lie—I had a difficult time getting past the first few chapters of A Northern Heart.  It wasn’t that the writing was [more . . .]

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It’s . . . thorough.

Editor: Donna Sirianni
December 28, 2008

I originally read this story back when the original chapters were up and I have to say, the writing’s vastly improved.  No more copses of doom.  (To those wondering, since I never reviewed this story on this site, it counts as a first review.  This is a rare technical exception to my "I don’t read rewrites" rule.)

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