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Primus Pilus by Lifethelemon


Primus Pilus is a story of low fantasy set in an alternate world version of the Roman empire. Alternate in that there exists some small amount of magic. Alternate in that it agrees with my spotty recolection of history. Primus Pilus is Online Serial Micro-fiction, meaning that it is a story which be be told in arcs, with each arc consisting some number of 320-350 word chapters, which will go up at least once a week, and usually more.

Note: Primus Pilus is unfinished, with no recent updates.

A partial series, with no recent updates

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Listed: Mar 17, 2009


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By Jim Zoetewey, editor, author of The Legion of Nothing

Sep 9, 2009: Last updated in April, it has an interesting beginning. It has enough of a feel of the Roman Empire that I could read it without being bothered. Though there wasn’t enough material written before it stopped to really get to know the characters, they seem interesting enough. With any luck, the author will start updating again someday.

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