Dec 12, 2009: I am enjoying this book. The writing is light (which I appreciate) and very readable. The characters are beginning to come to life.

I must say (and this is a fault of mine, as well) that the jumping around the book does makes it a bit hard for me to follow. At one moment we are walking with a prince and some girl up to his bedroom, the next we are arising with a monk in his chambers.

The site navigation took me a few minutes to get used to, as well, but in the end I enjoyed it.

Keep writing!

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