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Sand Castle by Ayami Tyndall

 

Innocent people are being condemned by unnatural misfortune. Dylan Quale’s life has twisted into a chain of bizarre coincidences, but he only knows what’s happening from anonymous phone messages bearing strange prophecies. Probability is being distorted, and only Dylan can fix it, but the world is in flux and routes to survival are vanishing into impossibility. To regain the lost futures he’ll have to challenge prophecy and carve his own path across realities.

Fate and Free-Will are colliding. Reality is collapsing. Will he be the one to make the final choice?

Note: Sand Castle contains some harsh language.


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By Fiona Gregory, editor

Nov 13, 2013: A simple wait at a bus station, some scary and mysterious texts on a man’s phone, and all hell breaks loose. Luckily Dylan seems to be a good man in an emergency, but he decides not to trust the author of the texts. Is that the right decision?

So far this story is promising – action packed and unpredictable. I think I like Ayami’s writing more with each new offering. "Sand Castle" has an ambitious concept with a lot of potential and my ultimate satisfaction with this story will depend on how well it plays out.

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Ok, I’m Hooked…

By illlogicmedia, member

Nov 13, 2013: Wow, just wow.

It has been a while since I’ve read a mind bending action packed book. Every page leaves you wanting more. I blew through the first 13 pages with ease.

If the author keeps this up, I will no doubtedly be hooked until the ending. So far the mystery, the probability, the sheer craziness catches your imagination. You can feel the the tension build up within yourself.

I even appreciate the few jocular jabs between characters in the story, very funny stuff. The other Interactions pull at your heartstrings in a way that doesn’t leave a man feeling less macho.

I have no idea what "Sand Castle" even eludes to from the story’s plotline, but it has grabbed my imagination and is not letting go anytime soon. I will be looking forward for more.

I recommend this work of fiction. Keep it up Ayami!

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