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Battle between Worlds

By JMcAchren, member

Nov 21, 2011: "Small Town Ravaging" is an interesting trip between the worlds of reality and dream-like fantasy. While this tale shows the unedited slips of a first draft, the author has built in many interesting characters that has maintained my interest through nineteen installments.

At times, the travel between the many locations of "the Inner," is a little confusing. However, the action of the plot in these different locations keeps the reader grounded. The constant battle between good and evil is a common, yet most often successful, pull to readers. The destruction of the real world is balanced with the mystery of places unknown.

Having come this far with "Benny from Away," I find it impossible to give up on the story.

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