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Storm’s Fall by JM Choras

"Water and air, rise up and bring forth the storm..." 

After two hundred years, the Stormwall that protected Eristhenia from outside interference is fading away, leaving the islands defenseless against the imperial ambitions of an ancient enemy, Kusan.  To thwart this enemy, six people from varying walks of life come together, working through politics, magic, and military prowess to save their nations from Kusani domination.

Note: Storm’s Fall contains some graphic violence.


A serialized novel, updating weekly

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Listed: Sep 21, 2009

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A lot of promise

Member: Eldoran
January 8, 2010

I’m a bit conflicted.This story features a interesting and diverse world, quite distinct characters and a lot of tension. Unfortunately the updates have been a bit unreliable and it can be quite difficult to understand whose POV the chapter features and more specifically who that is. There are right now several quite separate plot lines. It would need a lot more frequent updates. Perhaps a cast page would help too. A lot of things are still difficult to guess. The story is still a bit in the development phase. I’ll see what the future brings and perhaps update this

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