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Sythyry’s Vacation by Bard Bloom

A Journal of Transaffection, Adventure, and Doom. 

Sythyry is a fairly young immortal, a maker of enchanted clothing and other modern conveniences in the city of Vheshrame, the city’s ambassador to the dreadful monster Vae, the patron noble of a household full of misfits called Castle Wrong, and a diary-keeper.  After the death of the last of zir college friends, Sythyry decides to go on vacation in zir new sky-yacht, the Strayway.  Which is not a simple matter, since it means taking Vae and half of Castle Wrong along . . . 

Sythyry’s Vacation is a slice-of-life web drama written by Bard Bloom.  Episodes appear a few times a week, or more or less depending on the rhythm of Bard’s life.

Sythyrys Vacation is the quasi-sequel to Sythyry’s Journal, a diary of Sythyry’s college days.  Sythyry’s Journal is a century in the past.  Sythyry’s Vacation can be read first — and, since it is written by a more experienced writer for a wider audience, probably it should be read first.

Sythyry’s story is split in two parts; the second part can be read without reading the first.

The first, Sythyry’s Journal, is Sythyry’s first couple years in college, and can be found in a single (somewhat raw) file at http://chezgargoyle.com/sythyry/sythyrys-journal-complete.html (or linked from the Sythyry.com main page with link name “Sythyry’s Journal”).

Sythyry’s Vacation can be read from the beginning from http://sythyry.com/2009/02/18/821/ (or the “First Entry of Sythyry’s Vacation” link on the front page), or the first 150,000 or so words can be read at the “Sythyry’s Vacation collected” link).

Note: Sythyry’s Vacation contains some graphic violence and harsh language.


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Editor: Linda Schoales
July 7, 2010

Sythyry writes zir journal in a chatty, breezy style with lots of comments about zir friends and zir problems.  If you can handle long, hard to pronounce names and genderless pronouns (some of the characters can change their gender), this looks like it could be fun.

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Fantasy Angst and Adventure Galore

Member: Ysabetwordsmith
July 9, 2010

Meet Sythyry.  Sythyry is a cat-sized, hermaphroditic, immortal dragon with plenty of money and oodles of magic who lives on World Tree.  Zie is also a doom magnet.  Zir sexuality is transaffectionate, meaning that zie prefers lovers of another prime race.  Zir best friend is a crazy monster who accidentally wreaks havoc when asked for favors, or annoyed, or at the drop of a hat or a feather or a pin or anything else.  Most of Sythyry’s other friends have luck about that bad too; a few are even worse.

Sythyry has therefore decided to take a vacation to get away from this, which is reasonable; and to bring along a lot of zir friends, which pretty much negates the chance of doom reduction.  The doom is just more mobile now.  Random monsters.  Political entanglements.  Fleeing romances.  Sky pirates shooting up the ship.  That sort of thing.

"Sythyry’s Vacation" is essentially a look at Sythyry’s diary, where zie details the ongoing doom.  There are many plot arcs, some of which conclude neatly and others of which do not—much like real life.  Characters wander in and out, fight with each other, shag on the furniture, and cause other sorts of complications.  The description of World Tree itself is a fascinating exploration of high fantasy in a god-created realm that really is shaped like a supernally vast tree.  The story is usually angsty, sometimes sweet, often funny, occasionally pornographic.  It is reliably entertaining from the safe distance of another world, and no matter how insane your family situation is, you will be assured that It Could Be Worse.

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