I used to really love MU. Not that I didn’t have problems with it in the past—the syntax is a bit clunky at times, pacing is slow, not enough magic—but I shrugged those things off because it updates five times a week (so syntax is forgiven) and I was entertained. I’m simply not entertained anymore. I found myself trudging my way through chapters in hopes that it would be "a good one." It’s just that nothing happens anymore, it’s gotten repetitive, and the same issues come up again and again. Wink. 
I’m not trying to bash AE here. I don’t think anyone in the webfiction community has anything less that the utmost respect for her and what she’s done. However, I think it may be time for her to refocus the story and make something happen.

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