The premise is good. I enjoy reading about Mackenzie’s life in college. I also like the fact that while there is a lot of sexual content, it is still readable and has a plot. I’m getting more comfortable with the sex. I like the dynamics between the characters and the world. The roles they play are interesting.

While I still enjoy this story, it’s starting to get irritating while the main character goes on and on about the mundane. The sex is interesting, but it happens too often that it’s not as fun as it was before. It’s really really dragging. It doesn’t feel like a diary as much anymore, but more like a detailed list of things that are happening. I find myself skipping over chapters waiting for something interesting to happen and sometimes it does and sometimes it doesn’t. It’s really hit and miss and I don’t really have the time to search for those chapters that do have the material I want.

I’m still invested in the characters and I’m interested to see what happens to them. However, there’s only so much that I can take of them. I used to be able to read this story daily, but some of the characters are starting to feel a little stereotypical and annoying. My favorite characters are the ones that aren’t mentioned very often and the type of characters that get bonus stories written about them every so often. I need to take a break from this story and check in a few weeks to see if anything has changed. It’s not a story I can read daily anymore. That has nothing to do with the actual writing, but more so the main character. I do like MOAR Tales of MU though.

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