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TALES OF THE BRASS GRIFFIN

Editor’s First Impression

Editor: Linda Schoales
June 16, 2009

The writing in the first episode is a bit rough, especially the wording of the letter but it does improve in later episodes.  I also found the "dialect" of some of the characters to be a bit difficult to read.  Reading an accent is more distracting than hearing it.  However, the story seems to have potential.

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