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The Bad Genie by Mary Butler

Wishing isn't always enough. 

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When Melvin Sneed finds a magic genie, he thinks it’s the answer to all of his problems, including better ways to torment Frankie Hubble, his favorite target.  However, both he and Frankie are about to learn there is a lot more to wishing than just wanting.  The universe always expects something in return.


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Recommended for All Ages

Editor: S.A. Hunter
January 9, 2009

The Bad Genie is a delightful children’s story about a naughty boy who happens upon a genie’s bottle. Melvin is selfish and spiteful. His wishes are self-serving and mean, but his wishes do not turn out the way he plans much to his frustration. A wish for a life-sized, robotic T-Rex is disastrous. Reading about such an unrepentant and nasty boy was fun. His mishaps and comeuppance were even more enjoyable to watch.

The polar opposite of Melvin is Frankie, a nice, quiet, studious boy, who has trouble making friends. He is Melvin’s whipping boy and has some home hardships to deal with as well. He is a nice counter to Melvin. Reading this story was lovely. The dual protagonists and the effect the genie has on both their lives are nicely constructed. The end is a wee bit too saccharine for me, but I still took pleasure in the resolution.

The story is short and can be read in one sitting. I would recommend this to anyone who wants a light, amusing read or for children hungry for stories. I believe children 8 and up would enjoy this story immensely, especially young boys.

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A nice distraction.

Editor: Drew Daniels
December 16, 2008

As a DM for D&D, I’m always interested in seeing ways of perverting wishes. This alone is what got me through the first chapter of Bad Genie. The opening scene hurt a little bit to read, whether this is because of the actions of Melvin were downright childish, or because the way the dialogue seemed just plain odd I couldn’t [more . . .]

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