Considering the fact that this is the very first creative venture of the author (no poetry or short stories whatsoever), then I can firmly say that this is quite a feat!  The tenses, as one commenter had said, are just to be proofread.  What’s important is the passion and zest of the story.  How the author could clearly describe the emotions that each character felt.  It should be stated that there are two time zones in the story,  the past where Sandy and Steve lived, and the present where the author of the novel – Makenna lives.

I’m no an expert critic, but I can say not any neophyte writer could create a complex plot like that.

Cheers!

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