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Interesting and very intriguing

By Arcada, member

Sep 1, 2015: This story seems interesting and very intriguing. There’s an air of mystery about it. The english level is very good and I can’t spot anything to complain about. Good and unique style. On another note, the premise of the story is awesome. In a world where virtual reality games already appeared, Theodore finds out that one of the new games is a real parallel world on its own, to where players can go to by logging in, and that you can leave by logging out. The characters have a lot of depth, and have very realistic reactions, though its easier to relate to Bran than to Theodore. I’m looking forward to future chapters. I think the description of the story should be changed, as it doesn’t portray how good the story is.

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