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The Hunter by Amber

 

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Enrico Hierodon began his life as many of us do, with a mother and father and an old lady next door who liked to bake cookies. But this was not to be. Someone had an eye on Enrico, and does not plan on leaving him be. Someone is watching, cutting away the pieces of Enrico’s life that he doesn’t need, cutting at Enrico’s heart until he can become what he was always intended to be: The Hunter.

[part of the Link'd series]


A serialized novel, updating weekly

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Listed: Jun 9, 2010

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Editor: Linda Schoales
June 9, 2010

The first chapter is well-written and has some nice tension.  The 5-year-old Enrico is lying in bed when he realizes someone or something is in the house.  Torn between staying put and running to his parents’ room, his fear feels very real.

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