This story is written well enough, but what carries it is heart. Although I likely disagree with much of the author’s politics, (Yes, it is a guess), her efforts to write about issues that affects so many so far away from us are commendable. I think the story is missing the authors true voice, as it is clear to me whe tries to balance a story she believes in with what she may consider fairness. I say write what you feel, forget balance, and write not only with a goeed heart, but from the heart.
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