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The Unbroken Chaos by Alex Davidson

 

Two assassin teenagers discover that their first hit is a miss, and they attempt to kill her again, which sets off a chain of events that sends them on several adventures.

Note: The Unbroken Chaos contains some graphic violence and harsh language.



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Stark and CRAAZY!

By Fiona Gregory, editor

Mar 28, 2013: Whoa, I thought, reading the blurb for this story, assassin teenagers? Really? Yes, really. In this story, you don’t just suspend disbelief. Disbelief runs away and cowers in a corner, along with morality. The "good guys(?)" are worse than most bad guys. It’s its own breakneck, crazy, ultraviolent world. Well, maybe Tarantino would be at home there.

The narration is very spare and stark. For example:

"Piles of bodies in the streets. Debris throught the city. The smell of decay filling the air. As I ran back to the apartment, these were just a few of the things that I experienced."

And the plot doesn’t flow. It HURTLES.

Some people will like this, some won’t. Did I like it? Yes, I quite did. It’s original, and probably the sort of thing you will only read in webfiction.

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Not Buying It

By Palladian, editor, author of Super

Apr 28, 2013: While reading The Unbroken Chaos, I could see that this author has a good imagination and probably watches a lot of anime, two things I can most definitely connect with. There are a number of interesting ideas in the story, and the plot has a lot of action to it. However, I couldn’t really get into the story myself, due to the fact that I found it unbelievable enough that I just couldn’t relate to it.

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By rokingjaat, member

Dec 2, 2013: A COMPLETE WASTE OF TIME

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