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I didn’t think I’d like it, but…

By Oniwasabi, author of The Monster They Deserve

Sep 21, 2014: When I hit the first chapter I didn’t see a lot of promise. I wasn’t too interested in the main character being THAT young in any kind of superhero fiction (it either ends up with things being too watered down or the kids are TOO capable and my suspension of disbelief is destroyed). But I liked the writing style and decided to give it a chance, and thankfully time skips after the first chapter and we get our main character at about age 16. It’s a very interesting collection of powers so far, and I wish there was more than 9 chapters (at time of this review) as things have become engaging quite quickly after clearing the first chapter. The characters other than Alice are quite lacking in development so far but this will hopefully be remedied with time and more updates to focuson them.

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