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Timekeepers – The End of the Beginning by M. Abran Garza

We're making history - again. 

Isaac Chavez (Zac) just turned eighteen, maybe.  He was born on February 29th of the year 2058, a leap day in a non-leap year.  How did this happen, how is he here and where does he belong?  Searching for answers, a sense of purpose and a place to fit in, he joins History Corp.

Each weekend, the History Corporation sponsors a MMOEHS (Massive Multi-participant Off Earth Historical Simulation) for the brightest young men and women from around the globe.  Tach-Tech Museum, a space station tethered to the earth and accessible only via space elevators, provides the platform for the Historical Simulation.

When a routine simulation ends in disaster, Zac finds himself alone, his friends lost somewhere in time!  Searching the “Inter-web”, Zac discovers clues that he hopes will lead him not only to his friends but to answers about his origins.  Using a combination of old and new technologies he’ll journey through the annals of time, into history’s great unknown, hoping to save his friends and find himself.


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Listed: Jun 9, 2010

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Editor: Linda Schoales
June 9, 2010

The first chapter is solid, but a bit hard to follow.  The 2 characters are having a seemingly elliptical conversation, which I’m assuming has something to do with time travel or deja vu.

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